I'd like to try this one
Please confirm to my work.
Confirm on your work. Please submit it by reply.
This is a new type of translation approach.
Reviewing Japanese translation and modify it, You can refer the English version.
And if you have question, please let me know.
Thanks for your review and work.
We receive this translation, and will pass to internal review team.
Hopefully we can get the response from soon.
If there is any question or concerns from team, I will let you know.